Hello,
My name is Sabiha i am from India and and i had finished my University in my country and i had finished spacial course Alim form Urdu language . After finished my study i got marriage.
After married i came with my husband in Dubai. I got a Emigration from Dubai in 2005 to Canada.
I am very happy in Canada. i have a future plan i will start won business but first work my English spiking and writing .
Sabiha,
ReplyDeleteI will list some corrections for you to look at first:
- I must be capitalized (not "i")
- I finished (not I had finished)
- after finishing my study I got married
- after getting married...
- I emigrated to Canada from Dubai in 2005
- I want to start my own business (in what? ) but first I must improve my English Speaking and writing.
Sabiha - correct these then I will read again